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From: Good Sanai <goodsanai@uniwhale.co>
Date: Thu, 17 Nov 2022 10:30:17 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] GitBook: [#34] No subject

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 # Introduction
 
-<mark style="color:green;">Uniwhale is an oracle-based decentralized on-chain perpetual trading exchange that</mark>&#x20;
+<mark style="color:green;">Uniwhale is an oracle-based decentralized on-chain perpetual trading exchange where</mark>&#x20;
 
-* <mark style="color:green;">allows anyone to provide liquidity by providing stablecoins like USDC, USDT, DAI, and more, to gain risk-neutral yield from market-making and leverage trading</mark>
-* <mark style="color:green;">supports up to 200x</mark> leverage trading on BTC, ETH, and more mainstream crypto assets directly from your wallet.
+* <mark style="color:green;">You can trade, with up to 200x</mark> leverage, BTC, ETH, and many mainstream crypto assets, directly from your wallet.
+* <mark style="color:green;">You can provide liquidity with stablecoins like USDC, USDT, DAI, and more, to earn real yield from market-making and leverage trading.</mark>
 
-<mark style="color:green;">With the beauty of accurate price oracle and single-sided liquidity, Uniwhale exchange will make sure a fantastic trading experience for traders with Zero credit risk, and liquidity providers to get away from unnecessary impermanent loss.</mark>
+<mark style="color:green;">Based on objective price oracles and single-sided liquidity, Uniwhale aims to deliver the best trading experience for traders with zero credit risk, and minimise impermanent loss for liquidity providers.</mark>
 
-* <mark style="color:green;">Oracle-based price feeding enables zero slippage</mark>&#x20;
-* <mark style="color:green;">Single-sided stablecoin liquidity enables zero impermanent loss</mark>
+* <mark style="color:green;">Oracle-based price execution means zero slippage.</mark>
+* <mark style="color:green;">Single-sided stablecoin liquidity means zero impermanent loss.</mark>
+* <mark style="color:green;">Decentralized on-chain trading experience means zero credit risk.</mark>
 
-### Infrastructure Highlights
+### Uniwhale infrastructure is fully decentralised
 
-* Fully decentralized web links. Run locally if you like.
-* Through [https://uniwhale.co](https://uniwhale.co) for speed and convenience.
-* Use any IPFS gateway if the main website is not accessible.
-* Immunity to DDOS attacks.
-* Unique CID marks our app as immutable, with Immunity to MITM attacks.
-* Unstoppable distribution, we will be around no matter what.
+* We provide fully decentralized web links. You can run locally if you like.
+* Connect through [https://uniwhale.co](https://uniwhale.co) for speed and convenience.
+* Use any IPFS gateway to use the service even when the main website is not accessible.
+* Mitigate DDOS attacks.
+* Unique CID makes our app immutable, mitigating MITM attacks.
+* Censor-proof distribution, we will live no matter what.
 
-<figure><img src="../.gitbook/assets/uniwhale_system_intro_chart (1).png" alt=""><figcaption></figcaption></figure>
+<figure><img src=".gitbook/assets/uniwhale_system_intro_chart (1).png" alt=""><figcaption></figcaption></figure>
 
 ###